Friday, 7 March 2014

Andrew and Hannah's writing

I am watching the helicopter bring the pipes back and forth.  By Andrew
I saw a helicopter and I saw a wire attached to it. I thought it was doing some work.
By Hannah


  1. Well done Andrew - you have done a great job of recording the sounds you hear in words.
    Well done Hannah - super sounding out of 'attached'. What a great description!
    Keep up the great work.
    From Mrs Kitto

  2. Great writing guys!
    From Megan (Hannah's mum)