Hi Jack,Neo - I like how you remembered to put a full stop at the end of your sentence.Ava - I like how you had a go at some very neat writing.Indiana - I think your capital letter at the start was very good.Scarlet - Your writing looks good.We hope you had fun swimming :-)From Prep & Miss P
Thank you for reading my writing.From Jack
Awesome effort Jack. Mum!!
To Mum,Thank you, from Jack