Thursday, 20 October 2016

Jack's swimming writing

Jack- New Entrant

4 comments:

  1. Hi Jack,

    Neo - I like how you remembered to put a full stop at the end of your sentence.

    Ava - I like how you had a go at some very neat writing.

    Indiana - I think your capital letter at the start was very good.

    Scarlet - Your writing looks good.

    We hope you had fun swimming :-)

    From Prep & Miss P

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  2. Awesome effort Jack. Mum!!

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