Thursday 5 September 2013

Liam's Spring Writing


Spring is awesome.  Bees can surface.  They collect nectar from the flowers.  I can smell fresh grass.  I can can smell blossom on the tree.  Bulbs come to the surface.  Spring is the best.  Baby lambs, birds tweet, spring is wonderful.

3 comments:

  1. Well done Liam. You rose to today's challenge. Great sounding out of words, lovely neat printing and a super effort with punctuation.
    Keep up the super effort!
    From Mrs Kitto

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  2. Liam,
    I am SO impressed with your story! What an awesome writer you are! I think you are very lucky to have this class blog to share your wonderful work. What do you like most about the blog?
    Mrs K

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  3. This is Liam's Grandee from Palmerston North in the North Island, a long way from Clyde. It was lovely reading your story Liam, you are writing so very well.
    I also enjoyed reading your comments about school in the old days. I must be getting old as I remember playing hopscotch when I was at school and the boys getting the cane.
    I hope everyone in your class has a great week at school learning lots of great things
    Lots of love
    Liam's Grandee

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