Thursday 5 September 2013

Liam's Spring Writing

Spring is awesome.  Bees can surface.  They collect nectar from the flowers.  I can smell fresh grass.  I can can smell blossom on the tree.  Bulbs come to the surface.  Spring is the best.  Baby lambs, birds tweet, spring is wonderful.


  1. Well done Liam. You rose to today's challenge. Great sounding out of words, lovely neat printing and a super effort with punctuation.
    Keep up the super effort!
    From Mrs Kitto

  2. Liam,
    I am SO impressed with your story! What an awesome writer you are! I think you are very lucky to have this class blog to share your wonderful work. What do you like most about the blog?
    Mrs K

  3. This is Liam's Grandee from Palmerston North in the North Island, a long way from Clyde. It was lovely reading your story Liam, you are writing so very well.
    I also enjoyed reading your comments about school in the old days. I must be getting old as I remember playing hopscotch when I was at school and the boys getting the cane.
    I hope everyone in your class has a great week at school learning lots of great things
    Lots of love
    Liam's Grandee